>>51319
Yeah it's definitely one of the last snippets I would have wanted to get posted LOL. There's some quotes I wanna keep, but for the most part, like you said, it doesn't read how I want it to. Picrel was a rough draft and I'm rewriting all of it in my newest draft, so I'm trimming down a lot of the yip yap and melodrama. When I do my first drafts I tend to write everything that comes to mind just so I can sort through it all later. It's best to get all the shit out immediately rather than wait until the final draft, only to not be able to tell what's shit and what's not. You get what I'm saying?