Anonymous 10/22/2022 (Sat) 08:43 No.33686 del
>>33669
Good job Fanfic. Best one to date.
Only comment is on the legs not touching the floor.
The 'since' implies causality.
But it refers to her spreading her legs over the bowl. No causality there.

Maybe you were referring to the '[difficulty] of ascending the lofty heights...'
But then you should have put the part in parenthesis right after that.

See you next time.