>>1344
>>1345
as for the story so far,it feels immersive despite the breaks you have been writing it every now and then. It's surprisingly cohesive and the most interesting part is what she thinks from the inside while dealing with average situations. All in all,she feels attracted yet conflicted,the description make it hard to see an instant resolution for her.
Will she get rid of this problem?Will she deal with it? Is she going to have any trouble with her sister in law? Will any Apple family member point out the events?

And it also feels personal,the questions behind every little gesture makes you wonder what she is completely thinking: between how her brain works and what she actually desires.

There are no winners here but she sees herself as one....for a while.