>>1356
>I'd think that a Cadence green that wasn't slice of life, lewd, or somehow involving crissy could be a mouth watering prospect to some of her fans anyway. But you never know.
Any random faggot would write whatever thing to kill the time and forget about it whenever the thread ends. However, you say observations that definitely come from a lurker.Yeah,everything that doesn't fit into those lines,it's putting them out of the comfort zone(in theory).
The writing here is edgy. Edgy in the sense that these greens come out as experimental,not for everyone's tastes nor the most popular thing that you will desire. Sure,Cadence has had dark stories with Chrysalis,nonetheless,it's so mainstream or natural that the identity disguise comes across every thread,that making her a changeling would be boring as fuck.

Changeling stories? Over 9000. Bat stories with her? If there are any out there,I bet that they won't beat the fingers of my hand.

>>1357
>Glad it does feel immersive to ya. So part of it is working at least!
Well,that was part of the plan....that's a good sign. I hadn't felt that with the first posts but with all of them together at once,it flows by itself.

>This I suppose maybe from me always making internal observations myself. Not sure if that is a strength or a weakness in the long term but I think it works here.
Certainly polarizing. However,the difference between edgy and darkness is that the first comes as something random,instant and cool for the sake of trying hard while the latter,uses constant descriptions,comes with a context,things happen with the average consequences but with an uncomfortable setup...

The fact that the author shows the feelings into one character,reflects what another could detect and understand the reasons behind it.
It ends up more like a diary written about the events of an unrelated to story. It's not so in your face; it looks like it does for a moment but those personal thoughts nulify that direction completely once you dive into them.