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>She wants th world to be the simple idyllic and childish storybook. Equestria being mostly a utopia.
we are not in season 1 anymore, the butterflies not only fly in a colorful world,but we have also seen that those little creatures do have limits and have to return to home before the magical hole gets closed (season 4 ep 16), or that the Everfree Forest is not that scary to pastel horses in comparison to other adventures, or that the world gets solved by a magical appearance from the a princess when sometimes, the princess gets mocked or looked down (Rarity Takes Manehattan, Hoffields and McColts) to the point where it doesn´t mean a rock but another charge.
I know lots of people miss the old times and I wasn´t prepared to make a reply like this but phew, the analogy came naturally.

>Harming others maybe a fear of hers but this form she is more fearful of that it says about herself. Not even being judged by others but what it says about her world and admission to the complexities and responsibilities that come with such choices. That is what she truly feared.
there is a moment in which your appearance doesn´t matter anymore but your actions and your intentions. I am not saying that an ugly mare becomes beautiful from the inside but what I mean is that yes, you will show a form that will scare others but having to deal with that resentment all the time, will probably lead to unexpected and bigger consequences in the long run for living in an internal fear of not accepting who you are and where you and your sister come from.

>does this fic fit with Celestia? Will this fic look stupid by the season final. Agree, this fic isn't a perfect fic to judge or be used as a full theory.
I am just used to writing the royalties because they hold a more adult theme behind them I can channel easier than the usual characters. Basically, adult life. If you were to ask me to write Pinkie, phew I could do it but not as right as I have done before. Celestia is just another medium that was chosen for that experience and I had to use this thread for what I wanted. It may not fit 100% nor be completely in character (though writing Daybreaker with that sarcastic tone was really fun)

>It's a mix of personal reflection and theory on Celestia's nature as well, and neither suffocates the other.
yep, exactly. A bit in the middle between the writer and the character, considering that the narration is in 1st person. I cannot expose myself too much but I struggle to put her chill personality into this story.

>I won't rate this one as I feel it is has been a bit erroneous of me to do so in thee past. Especially when I'm not sure how to balance personal enjoyment with judgments of technical skill in my ratings.
like one would say about MILFs: ratings ain´t nothing but a number. I prefer commenting about it, impressions about what parts are right,wrong and so on. If you just said, 9/10 or 0/10 in the reply, I would have found it really boring and short to have an idea.