>>2234
Stupid...well, AJ is still on character, she is always with that same face whenever something goes wrong and smells dirty for her from a distance.

Basically, there´s not much to judge about a shitposting story, although it felt like a little comical sketch with a laugh track behind.
I would imagine that whenever Apple Bloom overexaggerates the milk drama, a couple of lines there would have made it, and when AJ say, skim milk, then it would accomplish a punchline for the audience.

It feels like that anyway, just that this would work better if it were animated.

Although I don´t know what else to comment. Maybe tomorrow will be a better day for AB, she seems to have woken up with the left hoof.

It seems that you wanted to write a typical misadventure for her......

UNLESS you wanted to reference this pure unfiltered evil creature