Anon 11/22/2018 (Thu) 02:03:59 No.2600 del
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>THAT EXPLAINS EVERYTHING. Whenever I try to review you, I just cannot reach that level of politeness and implication easily. In fact, it takes me a lot of time to judge properly and I fear at times if the review feels adequate or not to the creator when it goes serious. That puts me in a compromise in comparison to your reviews. How does he do it? I always ask that whenever I go for it.
TBH, I always thought my reviews, or perhaps I should word it as, my thoughts, were a little bit lacking. As there was little assessment in technical qualities other than my vague observations, because I was the type of person who generally didn't let that bug me too much and I was sure how well I could brake it down. It was just what I felt/observed, which certainly isn't nothing but I wasn't sure if it was useful to someone who wanted to IMPROVE. I have more recently been trying to fix this, but am not entirely sure where to go about it. Overall, your fics contained little that bugged me and I usually found stuff interesting in some of your longer ones. My most significant criticisms being narrative ones; most notably coming to mind how I thought you rushed the mid section of your last part of your Luna fic. Do not worry about your side. Go about a work how you feel when feel and you can tell me how you thought it worked/failed. I dealt with harsher stuff IRL and wouldn't be bugged if ya thought something was trash.

>At least, the freedom of experimentation is there and even though it brings its own problems, those are different and the dynamic and process behind cannot lead to the same results. Furthermore, /mlp/ only allows 2000 characters for a single post. Way too small for /end/ standards
Certainly. If anything, I'm not sure if Bat Cadence could've occurred as organically over there (and few other things, but she has the most potential).

>the situations I daydream are not cringy. By their own right, they hold some level of maturity at times and other times, I put calming/happy songs as a contrast to give the feel that I would realize that these events happen in that world.
Didn't think they'd necessarily be. Just something that feel weird to admit to a stranger. at least that's how I would feel with a couple of things

>yeah. In Canterlot, without ponies around. Just me and him trying to repeat those glory days. But as the situation is not the same, we decide in the end not to replicate and take the photo of our actual faces.
> you cannot translate this to outsiders until it gets applied or written in a fic just to see and analyze the results with an open mind.
Yeah I think I get that. Though the association with my mind is a few things from my childhood. Because there are some elements to those thoughts that are almost instinctive and you may have to go over... well that is in my case.