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>yeah, thanks a lot. It´s always welcome to keep an eye on that and try to become a little bit better. However, I am surprised that I have written around 3700 words for this part in just one night and the only awkward mistakes to be found are those (so far).
I may not have the best eye for it but I'd say that is an achievement.

>depends on what purpose I would try to convey with it. Those deaths have to add a message for the story. It has to complement it. If they don´t, I would focus on something else. There has to be something beyond that before putting them onto the table for a childish show like this one.
I'm probably count myself as one more open to taking full detours to the show at times. This is probably do to the influence of the various fanfics that I have read. Still sticking a little closer isn't so bad and can have it's own fun... not t mention keeping you grounded. Oh, I hope I can find one of the early hits that completely went off the rails. there is one in particular that shows how much the fandom has matured .

>I only wanted to express those feelings and then, combine with something else and it receives its own identity. I cannot promise anything because all I have built is just an excuse over another excuse.