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>Perhaps it is not personal
I may not review it yet but trust me, I see some signs of personal thoughts, mostly because of posts you made in the past

>Though it is completely seperate.This fic partly existed in concept but only came in eistence in this form over the past few days it was worked on.
so there are two more besides this one? and this was the side project? Wow, that´s impressive. You are surely trying to end this year with a pretty high note.

>Since I'm uncertain of opportunity to work the others before Christmas I went ahad and put out this fic so that way I hve something erious beides just more scraps to post.
Quality and satisfaction with what your write is way more important than setting a deadline. However, I have seen that people work better with deadlines instead of having none.

>Now on to my thoughts of the fic as it stands right now?
My thoughts have changed from this morning to the afternoon, it requires several reads in order to extract aspects that I have to mention and project them into a non-shitposting nor hot review. I wish I could give them to you and that you are nervous about them. But I prefer staying silent than giving a bad review that barely brings nothing for such effort.

>It was my most serious fic that I have gotten fully finished and was of a decent size (over 3000 words).
yeah, I believe it´s a pretty good standard size for a long fic. Maybe that should be a reference between long and too long for writing the story in one part only.

>When it comes to darker settings like this it can be hard to judge as to what got right or wrong, what standard you're using.