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And there it is. The greatest story ever put to digital paper sarcasm Yeah. When I said this was underwhelming I meant it. There really isn't much to say other than I tried to make this fic out of utter desire to make one in an hour. Though it is an early prototype for something else I've been planing for a little while. There is another prototype that is coming fortunately that will be more worth commenting on ( it's a little strange but more thought out) and I wouldn't said anything if I didn't have something else to bring to the table.