>>5794
there we go, both links works perfectly (even though it is the same song)

>>5792
>I almost thought was a slight cryptic feel that I thought was going on with some of the background implications towards the end but I wasn't sure
if you ONLY knew how much I have been hiding behind this story.... after having a bad experience for revealing too much, I am only sharing the secrets behind in this board. Otherwise, I could repeat those same mistakes and I don´t want to go through that experience again.

I am not going to say them now but you were hinting at them quite properly with what you have written:

>>5789
>I have ways to try to articulate this but I'm not sure how well I could get the meaning across. Let's just say that the flashback gives me a weird haunting feel with that quote.
you are aiming correctly here

>>5784
>Random one off fics centered on OCs don't traditionally do too well as there is both a bad reputation and a lack of emotional connection with the character.
>Though the fact that he is just a random OC means that this one off on it's own wouldn't hold a lot of appeal to many people.