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>I have written more green here than in /mlp/. Quite possibly because no one is watching or things don't so quickly as that place. That sure helps for criticism or feedback.

Yeah, I would probably be in the same boat in a way if I ever post a green here. Which is looking more likely

>the thing is...why would you suspect about that?I have more difficulties on writing because if you haven't noticed english is not my mother tongue and I am surprised nobody has pointed that out after making half of the posts here.
>>It's just like putting your brain completely on those words even though I am doing that right now with this one.


You do a pretty good job in setting up a dark tone. Honestly, there is a nice, almost eerie tone that doesn't come of as overblown but as a natural ambience to the tiny hints of a world that I see in what green you have posted here. It really feels like you are putting your true emotions into it. >>601 I especially felt that in the opening parts of your digits party green. Now about your grammer: I haven't really noticed any errors and mispellings any worse then mine. I think you are a bit better at writing in english then ya think. I honestly wouldn't have been able to guest anything of here your from based on your postings other then you use international/brit spellings for things sometimes. Then again, I'm from the southern US and probably don't have the best command of spellings and grammer myself.

Frankly, post away whatever you feel like. At the vary least it makes for a good pratice board.