>>630
>I haven't really noticed any errors and mispellings any worse then mine. I think you are a bit better at writing in english then ya think. I honestly wouldn't have been able to guest anything of here your from based on your postings other then you use international/brit spellings for things sometimes. Then again, I'm from the southern US and probably don't have the best command of spellings and grammer myself.

Oh well,that's nice to hear. I guess 3 to almost 4 years of lurking and constant search on english have served me for something.

>Frankly, post away whatever you feel like. At the vary least it makes for a good pratice board.

Everything here is nice for practicing, it's almost like a private room for now. The only objective here is posting,whatever but post. So even if there were mistakes or feedback,the thing that matters is the path through it,not the quality. The quality arrives after practicing. It could serve as a prelude or draft for posting in the main site,so you feel comfortable at first and then,expose it with security.

>You do a pretty good job in setting up a dark tone. Honestly, there is a nice, almost eerie tone that doesn't come of as overblown but as a natural ambience to the tiny hints of a world that I see in what green you have posted here. It really feels like you are putting your true emotions into it. >>601 (you) I especially felt that in the opening parts of your digits party green.
>your true emotions
I didn't know it was possible to convey emotions through some random writing that I made in less than an hour. I always wanted to post something related to the depths because we actually have fear of the unknown.
However,I knew that when I started to write it, I had to end it when all my emotions started. Like "I have to write this and I want to set up the comfort/ending right now". Everything was inspired by the ending comfort and the desperate situation. I wanted the ending to pay off in which tries to transmit that you have reached the light ,you are here having a nice life or even better.

The transition had to feel eerie because you usually start those things with the worst expectations...and it's pretty funny it conveyed a eerie story to you because all I do is self criticism with some irony and philosophy put between the lines. More like is not your typical edgy because it gets drowned by constant descriptions and not instant actions. Describing the feelings and some thoughts make things more realistic I guess.

And yes,I did that green because the >>600 post are not my lines but lyrics that could set up the image. The life after the digits party came unrelated to the post in terms of bats, but I felt like posting a personal celebration in the digits thread.