Well, I´ve got plenty of time to review this during this afternoon so, I´ll attempt to depict my thoughts about this comic. Here it is:

Friendship is Magic--The Night the Magic Died ( by ArofaTamahn, 2012-2014)

Where do I start with this one? Overall, I´ve liked it. I could leave it at that and close the thread right here. However, let´s dig a little bit deeper of certain moments that I have decided to write down.

For this comic, we have to keep in mind that there are 3 original characters inserted for this story: Arofa Nahmat (Nat as a disguised pony), Garret and Gralo (hidden inside the griffon).

What happens here is that both the griffon and the wolf correct perspectives about a problem those two. Nahmat (the worlf) is a bounty hunter who is going after Gralo yet she blames it all to the griffon. The griffon however, because he displayed more proper manners in order to cause a good impression, he managed to convince about his studies in the university (abandoning them but Garret was registered in order to leave a mark). He follows a route of self learning and in one his spells, the results ended up being nasty and there you have the plot device.

He manages to convince both the princesses and the mane 6, he warns about the presence of Nahmat before she shows up and apparently, she acts like the villain (or at least, presented as someone suspicious). These manners of pushing around the mane 6 and speaking with so much force to the princesses inside their minds, acting like CB anon said >>6493, not in a clever way but more like a jerk. These little details turn out to be a handicap for her, losing the battle of persuading the ponies that she was right about her version. She was, thought she omitted certain points she hadn´t been aware until the last quarter of this comic.

Turns out that she had held a few fears in the way she acted (especially towards Fluttershy because of the stare) and the only way, she had changed her point was with the introduced couple from A Canterlot Wedding.