>>32542
Your hard work is greatly appreciated. I'll try to provide some proof-reading.

1. You left in an 'r' on the 'you' there

2. I checked and apparently 'noone' is an acceptable way of writing 'no one' but you might get shit for that

3. Left in a honorific in there when you didn't use them anywhere else

4. You might get shit for using memes

Again great job I assume it's a good enough translation.