Have I discussed my conversion bureau piece here before? I was dropping by back when the other pony was talking about starting the Fall_of piece so I know I've been here but I can't remember when or how often.

I have a couple of specific problem with the piece associated with the clip I'm about to attach -- I really let my mane down when I wrote it and while I like the dream sequences, I don't know if I started over if I could get the same level of feel while not having every mare literally throw herself at my Gary Stu insert.
Anyway the attached PDF is the latter half of the first chapter and it's okay, maybe. Let me know if you think its not.