>>5919
>I do not like the Conversion Bureau very much. Most stories that I've seen are one side dominating the other in a ridiculous fashion and the grimdarkness is usually done to the point of overriding the characters personalities.
more like why I am not familiar with Conversion Bureau is more like despite reading the common setting for all the derivative fics, it´s absolutely clear that after watching the entire show, one would have to imagine the case of how both sides are being pushed and how Celestia goes like a nice totalitarian to conquer the entire world with magic and from the human side, that premise would work as an excuse for getting away with military/action scenes potentially.

But yeah, you have read my thoughts before I even bothered to get info about its setting. Before diving into the little story shown here, I would prefer reading at how both universes human and ponies are separate without collapsing in terms of matter but manage to stay in contact with each other (like they did with Sunset and Celestia)

>>5915
>I suppose you could just offer your two cents on what makes it work or not or what feels off. That's what I'm probably going to do.
I don´t have any other choice. Despite reading the premise of this fic, I will admit that is not my cup of tea because of the conflicts that said environment brings onto the table.

>>5907
let me read it and I will highlight a few lines of that part.