Anon
05/17/2021 (Mon) 07:47:59
No.7574
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>>7572>are any of you familiar with "poetry"?Not very, as I said:
>>7560>Poetry wasn't strong....
>A mere simpleton I am.>My grasp English uncertain. >Uhm ... here you go?Honestly, I think it works well enough. My lack of knowedge on the subject not withstanding.
>A noise made -- locate that!>both ponies and there we sat.I think it has a slight Dr. Suess quallity with the use of "that" and "sat"
again based off my limited knowledge of poetry but I find this working well enough both in a cute way and in contrast with such lines as:
>packed and encamped, a trek for hell.>straight outta Doom, portal tech's might.
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