>>7820
>the whitetail comment was, I believe, italicized

Okay I looked it over again, and it wasn't. Was supposed to be, to make it more clear what Anon said, and what Hops thought about what she'd heard.

While I'm correcting myself,
>Read the next last thing Anon
I thought Anon's comments on where the gems actually came from was just coming up, but no it was a few posts back. It should, corrected, read something like
>Read the last thing Anon to himself.

This copy might be corrected, but in some cases I've found I accidentally went back and forth a bit between having the mare-MC's first name be Roasting, and Roasted but since I need to change it to something completely different anyway I guess I won't belabor the point further.