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"Alright we'll come back when we're equipped to dismantle robots but I need that thing scrapped and into my hooves." Grey was about to turn and ask Low Sell what her input was, but then he remembered how often he'd had to cover for Stormy being his pet, with sayings like 'yes I let my pet talk' in the town where the Former Unicorn, called Temnyy by the griffon guards, stole the sky rats he hated so much and ... broke them. Just so he can sell them cheap to his citizens. So he made a point of reminding himself not to look at her as he turned back the way they'd come.

I don't think it is that awkward. Really, some paragraphs are going to be exposition filled in a world where you are trying to do proper world building. The only part that throws me off and feels unnecessary is noting that the griffin guards called the town Temnyy. You could easily slip that somewhere else later.

>even if it's not a whole story, somepony out there might like it
Go for it.