>>9063
>Well, it's 9880 right now, so ... >"over nine thousand" ...?
Just as the board. Hmmmm. Everything is in alignment.

>The system so far was this: Maize would climb two steps, bracing literally half a hoof on a back leg, and the opposite front leg, on what used to be, millennia ago, a step that was now barely deep enough to stand on. The other legs were braced outward against the stairwell walls. The Breezes would take a couple steps, pulling Fuscia off her ledge and forcing her to scramble to a new position of security. Starry hadn't had to levitationally grab her, yet. The pterripi were 'flying' a little bit, mostly pressing their weight against the cliff outside the stairwell.
I am a sucker for descriptive little details of adventure like this. Maybe this is a retarded thing to highlight but I enjoy this so much more. Some writers skip over these things and it ruins the sense of adventure and peril in otherwise decent fics.


>As the magic drifted down,
This is not a correction. Somewhere between a suggestion and a question. Would it be better to use 'their' instead?
>As their magic drifted down,
Or is there some sort of arcane grammatical rule my simple mind is not aware of?

>bots in my thread
Why a random anime horse though?