>>9317
Missed Lu-na (two syllables) and cre-at-ion (three). In other words, retarded.

>>9333
>/endpone/ popping up in dreams
>trips
Does that mean anything... OOOOOOOH spooky.

>>9330
Interesting tone. Feels like this must be influenced by something. I do note a few grammatical errors but for something written on a whim I am impressed.